Troy_Dellinger

This is a fun read for me. I like the characters so far. They can be "shallow" but we are seeing it through Jie Ming'e one-sided POV firtsly after all and he judged people as quick as lightning, lol. The "narrator" pov is fun, however, to round out JieMing's skewed judgement of other people or make it more skewed, hahaha. The pace is nice, not too fast to feel like it was forced, but not too slow it feels like things barely changing. As for writing, I found very few typos (or maybe incorrect choice of word since I see them repeatedly for the same context), but overall the sentence is still easy to understand, so the it didn't bother me that much. I can't wait to read more! And I do hope it only gets better if not consistent. Thanks author! 👍

what did he eat??? how many jars of numbing pills and qi restoration pill he had to bring? wonder if the tower pop up food when he is about to die...

Yamato's mother, and her son name is Huang Dahe? Did Orange have 2 sons? Or does everyone here have a nickname and real name? I'm confused 🤔

i have a feeling the dynamics in Jianshen and rufeng's relationship isn't that much different to jianyu and fengxi, lol.

Is creepy Nala a spy for some noblewoman? Poor Felix being obsessed by crazy people left and right... for better or worse. Yeah, Asher is also crazy... for Felix, lol.

I thought the journeys are going to be boring after a while, but I was wrong, hahah! I love how every "loop" bring a bit more about Cass. We are presented with initial depiction of Cass, which kinda villain-like. But as he went through the loop, the events peeled the layers of who Cass is, bit by bit, and we begin to see someone complex. I also love the concept of shell and how the author doesn't just make these shells as decoration, but instead point out how each shell affect Cass' decision making and mental state. Making the shell practically "alive", unlike most transmigration story where shells are considered dead for good from the get-go. The vast amount of npc in this story is surprising. Some are one dimensional char (pure evil/good), but many are well built enough they are relatable. The world are explained quite well too, with all different settings and all to give reader a sense of the era and society. I do feel weird progression with the sleeping time (did it affect the world's progress?), but that's probably the only glaring thing I feel about the world's workings. As for pacing, despite limited number of pages each arc, the pace was acceptable. I don't feel the loop world's rushed too much to the point there is no time to "take a breath and ruminate prior events". I was surprised even that I find in many cases that I feel that things are wrapped up nicely and I still can feel time and events flow naturally. Writing is good. The author don't use much flowery vocab, but it's not boring either to the point I notice some phrases being repeated over and over. It also contains barely any typos, which helps immersion. 👍

don't worry too much, please 😀 it's just my own preference. you're already amazing for sharing this story in the first place! not everyone have even the courage to even try. be well, and keep writing 😘

aaah, got it. thanks for pointing out, author! i think i got distracted and didn't register it, thinking she's just resting the rest of the day (and with the guy coworker hanging around helping her, hence the hacking and stuff doesn't seem plausible to me).

I only read up to ch 8 at the time I wrote this review, so take it with a grain of salt. This book got potential. The blurb interest me tbh, because I like independent, strong, and self-sufficient female lead. However, the first chapter opening was confusing, speaking of writing, although it got better soon. There are a few typos, but I can manage to auto-correct in my head. At least, it wasn't as bad as other books I've read, but it does distracted me from being immersed. Some scenes, seemed to have weird, unsatisfyingly explained, timing that just doesn't fit with events happening in previous scenes. Characters feels a bit rushed. Some are unnecessarily mysterious, others are kinda have no reason to behave the way they are with their initial background. Even the main lead was kinda superficial, because while readers get why she wanted revenge logically, there wasn't much too make her relatable emotionally. Story development up to the one I read feels rushed (which contributed to the section above). Personally, I feel like the impact of the breaking point wasn't meaningful because the lack of insight into main char's psychological state. How distraught was she? How deep the betrayal she feels? And this continues, with main char facing events after events with "downtime" scenes just being kinda info dumped. I prefer slow-burning stories for this kind of theme, so maybe that was why I find it hard getting immersed. I do not mean to discourage, so please don't be discouraged author!! The plot is interesting, after all, and the promise the blurb sells (revenge story like no other) pique my interest to see how it unfolds.

when did she return home? i thought she slapped mandy, asked her to clean up, and then fainted? 🤔