MD_Toriqul_Islam

Not bad. Writer likes to repeat himself which should be minimized. Reduce the family time, and focusing more on empire building and introducing new technology at a reasonable pace would make the story just perfect.

great story .................,......,...,

update please

update please

it looks like an essay, filled with information no one asked for.

Story is pretty good, but the grammar is garbage. please use a qualified editor. And regular update would be much appreciated.

update please 🥺

Story has great potential. just make it a little more fast-paced.

painfully slow paced....................

interesting story ......................