lok_4369

can't say much about stability so I just listened to others, anyway, many small mistakes, though the readers make them fun at times, the ver of harry is absolutely annoying and stupid, though that what's he was like in the books so Ig that's fine. (I personally don't like it though) there is some development in other characters but mc is already a mature person so no development there, Like the AU but Neville should have been given more development. anyway. its pretty avg for me in general.

Its my first day on the site and well, you got me pissed. Dude, at least if you want to give yourself compliments try to make the sub acc look real. Writing level is of the 3rd grade at a foreign school. the idea is nice, but its awfully executed and you try to trick people into reading it, if I knew how I would have already reported you