Keiou_Owlo

I loved this chapter. And I love this song, so this was one of the best chapters.

🙄😮‍💨🤦🏽‍♂️ Why do they always do this? What's wrong with keeping quiet and going on your way? It's so stupid to do something like this.

I'm feeling a mixture of love and hate for this chapter.Love, because it was exciting and unexpected. Hatred, because many of the mistakes he made seemed forced, and of course, he was unmasked so early. The skills are a bit off the charts, but they fit into something you read in the books. In the books, magic is much more common than in the series, so this was a welcome adaptation. But, it was kind of frustrating to read. Him making mistakes for no reason, the forced ups and downs, and other little things, but they can be overlooked. But don't be fooled. The chapter was great. It just seems like he's become weaker than when he was in Valyria.

The character interactions felt a bit forced. But that's okay.

His power is so OP, that the Author had to make him dumb and uncreative.

Not to be annoying or anything, but does every sentence have to have the guy's name? Ryo Carter happy this, Ryo Carter thought about it, Ryo Carter looked at it. It's kind of annoying to be honest.

As soon as I read what he said I threw my phone away from me and covered my eyes. It's one of those scenes where the author writes to be funny but doesn't think about what the readers will think.

Diddy? As in: what's stuck? That was a surprise. I hope MC doesn't go to one of his parties.

I think his personality is just shit. Classic.