TomFromFuture

does not start

this is a really great story but when it reaches chapter 240 or something near it, I can not flow it's pace and does not make much sense to it. i know author want to develop his character but for that the soldiers rebelled in silver town, I can understand he was careless there and forget to check the loyalty of soldiers from system but then the enemy duke sent an killer that wiped everyone in the castle and he does not activate his talent until everyone is dead even his pet and the reason the author gave is blood was evaporated by fire. then for that reason he goes into depression and leave on a solo adventure.,.... i don't want to write any more author according to me u r currently introducing many elements at a fast pace and here I am confused and flow of story is completely cut off.(new elements - I am(the god), new talent(zenith level - kyros), new territory, new power levels(the awaken or something), the people he is currently staying with( who r they) ) , just know the story is totally out of control and I can not connect any dots anymore

he was born for defence games

what use is a powerful commander when all he does is getting easily overpowered

we understand what u want to show so pls next time just make it fast and efficient and do not waste so much chapters on it

r chapters becoming shorter or am I the only one feeling that

nah he has the heart of a great explorer and that was his dream even before the use of future site and that has never changed

yeah that will probably also increase his energy reserve