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"Oh, the heroine is pregnant, huh? Absolutely wonderful! Not only was she useless before, but now she’s officially a burden throughout the entire story. Truly a brilliant move to slow down the plot and make it even less interesting. Maybe we should just give her a comfy chair in the corner of the narrative and wait for the dramatic moment where she’s finally eliminated for the greater good. Can’t wait to see the protagonist grow… once she’s out of the way, of course!
Hmm, the premise of this novel is truly unique and intriguing. With two best friends being transported to another world, and one of them turning into a woman, I wonder how their friendship dynamic will evolve. Will there be any harem elements that emerge in the story, or will the focus remain on their friendship and adventures? I'm really interested to see how the author develops this plot.
Does the protagonist have no system? Then how can he fight the original protagonist
Yes, I intend to continue it.
"Thank you so much for your review! I truly appreciate the feedback. I aim to create a captivating and entertaining world, and your criticism is invaluable. I'll strive harder to maintain a balance between imagination and reality in my storytelling. If there are specific aspects you'd like to suggest or see more of, I'm open to hearing them. Thanks again!"
I feel that way too, it seems too forced
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Thank you. I appreciate your effort in helping me improve the sentence.
Thank you for your input. I'm always open to learning and improving my writing skills. If there are specific suggestions or areas that need improvement, please let me know.