Man... what a great read! the author's writing style is very clear and easy to understand while managing to stay absolutely brilliant! the dialogue is well-written and the MC looks very interesting! overall this novel is promising. Kudos to the author! 👌

What can I say about this chapter... it's really something else. Calling it unexpected would be an understatement..

It's called Vinland 🙏

is that Erwin Smith!!

Arthur is either extremely terrified or just straight unhinged

I love it! the concept is really intriguing and the author's writing with all the sound effects and the pov style goes so well with the story! can't wait to read more. Kudos to the author!

We found MC's favourite word

A perfect first chapter! got me excited to read more.

what a great beginning 😂

The writing can use a bit of work but still a great read though! the characters show great potential and the plot looks promising. Recommended!

a good read with a fresh take on the system trait, can't wait to see more!

Fantastic read! The author's writing style really paints a vivid picture of the environment and settings as I delve into the story. I may not be too deep into it yet, but it's clear that this narrative is bound to become even more captivating. Keep up the great work!

While the wording and the vocabulary can prove to be difficult to understand for the casual reader, veterans would definitely enjoy this vivid and masterfully written piece! The author's style is full of detailed descriptions, rendering his world easily pictured and so immersive!

I hope the uncle is alright!

Another great chapter! It just felt a little too descriptive...

I think the wording is a little difficult for the casual reader, still an intriguing beginning though!

Impressive work! Having delved into bits of the prequel, I found the storyline easy to follow, and I think Avatar fans would vibe with it effortlessly. But even for those unfamiliar, it holds its own as a captivating read. It's so good, it could easily be a blockbuster movie. And for those who relish rich story details, this book is a treasure trove. Kudos on a job well done!

The writing is quite commendable, and the portrayal of the world background is vivid. Yet, there's room for more depth in character development, especially for Lucas. Nevertheless, the overall experience of the read is enjoyable. Highly recommend it!

your writing style is really something else! it's elegant and beautiful without being too complex. I'd already recommend this novel for the writing alone!

The narrative is incredibly engaging, weaving a tale so enthralling that it held my attention long into the night, compelling me to read even more. The experience was nothing short of fantastic, with each turn of the page adding to the excitement and intrigue of the plot.