Aboudi_Salim

how about giving him a new eye formation instead of the regular black swatsika look how about a changeable one gold one black when using gold the ability is battle god form just like susano but pure physical force increase by 10 times for 3 mins then its unique power total regeneration but has a cool down for 3 months the black comes with 2 abilities spatial domain where he can cast a 9m domain where he has total control over space where he can do spatial blades or waves or even compress said domain into a weapon preferably a trident due to his water just second ability nyx's flame a freezing flame corresponding to his ice Jujutsu that even affects the soul and the rest of its's abilities to your imagination

thank you for mention 😊

thank you for the chapter . it was great suggestion: how about if he can accumulate the sign in for a bigger reward Question: shouldn'tgluttony increase his body stats

don't give up, it has great potential , I think it just needs to be more fast paced

demi dragon form

A shameless review can you blame me , please tell me what you think, vanish no jujtsu

it will differ FROM the original some what like a stronger Jiang Cheng a mysterious background for Jiang Zenhai the father and a new organisation thats only purpose is to correct the fate River and not only Nan Bei Chao descended from immortal realm many allies and enmities will form also I plan to complete it in 300 to 500 chapters spanning 5 volumes over the realms but please tell me your thoughts about the MC and the story in general and don't hold back I can handle it

firstly I'd like to thank you for reading my novel I'm serious in writing I will be consistent in writing one chapter per day and this is my own creation I've never copied anything from outside it's a figment from my imagination I hope you still support and advise me in the later chapters thank you

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