Xablau_XZero

It wasn't what I expected but I really liked it, I'm very interested in the future interaction of the wives in the main world ----------Google Translate-----------

For those who have already read the normal novel, this is a waste of time, the fanfic is good because it doesn't change anything from the original, I read up to chapter 18 and there isn't even one change, I think the author must have copied and pasted 99 % of the story just putting the sharingan

The idea of ​​the novel is good but the execution is shit, this novel has no substance, it's not a comedy, it's not a serious story with logical action, this shit is completely meaningless, when you make a novel you have to have rules to create a world, but this Chinese crap only has slaps in the face and displays of power. Just to let you know, I've only read a few chapters but I've already deduced the type. If it's different, someone let me know in which chapters the story starts to get good. ------------Google Translate-----------------------------------

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Boy, how is it in Game of Thrones? I'm afraid of having NTR, well, in the series everyone eats and is eaten, but reading this in a novel doesn't go down well. -------(Google Translator)-----------------

Does the protagonist continue to have sex with Maya even though she is married or do they resolve it later? Even though Jin is an androgen, I didn't see anything that deserves this shitty betrayal

This novel is crap, there's nothing to comment on, just read the first 10 chapters and you'll know it's crap, I don't know how there are so many chapters, seriously, I don't understand how there can be so many chapters of this thing.

I really want to take something slightly large cylindrical and attach it to the excretion hole, making an in and out movement with this author. Shit, the novel is on Hiatus, just search for "The Last Prayer"

But then she is the version of Lily who chose to betray the MC, like let's suppose that the MC's wife betrays him and he ends up going back in time, she will still be the traitor, let's put it another way, what if a woman betrays the MC and he restores her body until she returns to virginity and then erases her memory of the act, it also gave me a certain fear of how people were remembering the saga as a dream, but like you said she won't remember anymore, that fear is over thank God, like it just leaves a bad taste in my mouth, but the story is cool I won't stop reading I'm crazy waiting for the new chapters.

I liked it, I'm looking forward to the next chapters, I hope the author doesn't give up.------------------Google Translator------------------