This One is great masterpiece in the making . The story line , twisted plots , perfect harmony and flow makes it one of the best on the block.

are you using these names because of international reader them it's good otherwise change the name to Korean namesand please use an attractive covercover have influence too somehowbut remember you need to follow every of others advice just do as your heart says

Do your best

If you are writing K because it's fiction it's okay but please edit the sentence structure

at . please edit it all mistakes will be edited

don't right 28 right after full stop

K is Korea

so you have made

I mean change said to replied

kimla replied and headed to

sister but you never introduced

Alvin was 18.. .. .

hahaha I like this

don't add with with again and again rather use comma

please fix this sentence . You have the beauty to be a model but why did you choose military. something like that roughly

Fix it like she was 23 with these features . don't write kimla age it's kinda awkward in my point of view

Busan in Korea ?

a true hallyu wave lover

oh I didn't consider that . right I should right my lady

yes