I don’t like harem but I well read some if it’s good and recommend it to you but harem is not my favorite so me liking one is on in a million One thing I’m not good at spelling or making sense
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Wow this is the first time I heard mc with a reasonable explanation other mc want to go back even though in that world they are dead which is annoying because some lived a bad life but other lived a good life and some just so but what I don’t like about some mc is that they like to go back to that misery one for the family or something like that I just hate the fact that they want to go back you die no need to keep thinking about the other world
Now if you’re going to attack me for using ChatGPT just know all I said what fix my writing that all so what you see is what I wrote but it just changed the simple words that it has to a more complex sentence which for me it hard that why.
If you’re planning to read this novel, let me give you a quick update for those who enjoy analyzing logic or simply reading for fun. One thing I didn’t like about this novel is how the MC changes over time. At the start, he’s portrayed as this cold, cool, and detached character. But as the story progresses, he starts trying to change himself. I get that the author is trying to show character development, but it feels inconsistent. If the MC is supposed to be an assassin, shouldn’t he remain cold and hardened, at least for a while? What’s the point of emphasizing his assassin background if he’s not going to act like one? Another issue is the way the MC tries to save some slaves. This isn’t a bad plot point in itself, but it’s poorly executed. The MC deliberately gets himself kidnapped to infiltrate the group and save them, but it’s full of logical inconsistencies. For instance, the MC has mana, yet none of the kidnappers notice it—except for a girl in the same cell. Let me explain the backstory. The MC takes over the body of someone who has recently died. This body was running away from the kidnappers before its death. Here’s where it gets strange: why aren’t the kidnappers questioning how he’s alive again or how he suddenly has mana? In this world, a person’s mana is detectable through their hands, so it should’ve been obvious. The reason the MC wants to save the slaves is because he sees himself in them, which is fine. But the real reason—revealed by the author—is that a princess is among the captives, though the MC doesn’t know this yet. The whole setup feels like a typical cliché: save the beauty, and she falls for the hero instantly without a second thought. Now, the logic behind the escape plan is where things completely fall apart. The MC plans to run away with the captives, but anyone who understands human nature knows it’s not that simple. Some captives are injured, sleep-deprived, or starving. When people are scared, human nature kicks in, and things can turn ugly. Some will betray others to survive, and others might even resort to violence for their own sake. This lack of realism bothers me because the MC is supposed to be an assassin—someone who has seen the worst of humanity. He should understand human betrayal and the complexities of survival. Instead, the author glosses over these issues, making everything too easy. It feels like the author isn’t considering the bigger picture, which makes the story frustrating to read. "Now if you read this far I did use ChatGPT to fix some of my writing but it changed most of my work but it still the same everything is the same but it has a more complex writing that I don’t put in my writing.”
Now this is complete nonsense there no way this girl is different from her family the only way this can happen is if the family is not treating her right or she has a different opinion on the situation which in most cases people don’t change if their families are the same they will be the same this was proven in history that noble family dont change the way they think about the poor people only few do. Read history if I remember correctly about history and noble it should be true.
That six minute that he talk about is a little bit a no because when people are scared they do unthinkable things this is human nature and behavior this got to think of this problem too human are being that when scared they will sacrifice someone else life for there own even if that person is trying to save them they won’t care about that they just want to live that why you got to think of people nature in this kind of situation.
Now this is not a way to think about it nothing goes easy you got to think about the people too some are scare and can’t walk some are children which in many cases they like to cry which give away what your doing
Now this is dumb because he not including the people injured and people who are low on sleep and the food they had taken this will put a lot of pressure on him and the people. This is why I don’t read this kind of novel because authors think like it’s easy this is a kidnapping group the victim has to be injured and low on food and sleep so running is out of the question but author don’t really think about this it’s more realistic and more interesting to readers because they like to see how a character going to complete this task but some author just don’t I read a really interesting novel where the mc is a complete weakling but found way to survive in many different situations even if he dieds while fighting he still got the other guy it’s like finding a way to kill the person’s while also making yourself safe that novel was good but it was ruined for me because it was harem I don’t like harem so yeah
Just why?? Why even change just change your ways not the opposite
This guy annoys me it doesn’t matter if your a assassin just kill him like tf are you on about just use you skills you learn why are you trying so hard to forget about it you want freedom make money you don’t want to be a slave to someone just don’t, a assassin can be good or bad it’s the way you use it the only reason he doesn’t want to use it is because he was a slave to the company now that he is free he can do anything he wants I don’t know why authors like this kind of mc they are annoying in many way’s. This is why I don’t like to read about assassins because all the novel I read about it was just a assassins trying to change his way the only reason I’m only reading this is because it has assassins in it like tf why even put assassins in it if your not making the mc be one it’s just annoying and one thing I don’t like is how much his character changes from chapter one he was cool and cold but he turned out to be a complete idiot it’s just a joke at this point.
It’s like there no brain in here how can the kidnappers not see it but the girl can like tf is this about??