Mr_Ostrich

Nah bro, u aced in MTL path.

Tohg, ri are 9+ novels haven't read lotm

best wn fr

it's fun so far but she us so stupid

:) I'll try my best.

This review is based on first five chapters only. Writing wise, it's good and so is the stability of updates. The world development so far is well average but it's alright considering its just the initial few chapters. My only issue is the progression of the plot and character of the mc. I honestly don't see any depth in him. The first five chapters also felt slow and bland. What I am saying is I don't see a hook that makes me want to read further. (But I am pretty picky of what I read so that's that.) Overall, this has big potential. Good luck, author.

Honestly feels too slow and bland.

Why info dump in the start? Not needed. Better show slowly than tell. Also shouldn't the guy have a new personality cause of assimilation and all?

for 30+ chaps? weird. :(

So far it's better than most wn stuff I have read. (Not that I have read many) but sentences break after , makes it feel off. eh just being nitpicky.