Cinna_4

Already an intense start to the novel. The worldbuilding is very interesting, especially the visuals of the story. The world background is very vivid and is described in such a way that would be easy to imagine for the readers. Definitely looking forward to the development of the characters and plot progression.

I really like the writing style of this novel. I have been an isekai fan for a long time, and reading this book made me feel nostalgic for the first isekai series that I've experienced. I like the MC so far, and I have no doubt that the world would be expanded more and characters would be developed. So far, it's been a good read[img=recommend]

So far it's been a good read. I am interested in seeing how the characters would be fleshed out even more, especially the MC. The dialogue and worldbuilding has been solid, and am looking forward to seeing how everything would develop.

Wow, thank you for your kind words. I will try to make it even better than I already is[img=strong]

I will say that I am very interested in the worldbuilding of the story. It's probably the most intriguing aspect of it. I do think the dialogues could be better and delivered more smoothly. That said, there is big potential for the story to be way better than it is now. I have faith that the author can improve this series and make it peak. Good luck!

Thank you! I do want to focus on establishing the roles for each character very carefully as well as the world, so it is kind of slow. But I'll try to make it very rewarding in the future[img=gift]

Always been a fan of great FL characters, and am always regretful thay we don't get too many well written ones, especially this generation. Which is what makes me appreciate novels like these, that have genuine depth to those characters, and are not only fun to follow, but also very inspiring. Keep up the good work fr[img=recommend]

Really intrigued by the start of this novel. The descriptiona of the setting has been really good, and the mysterious aura really captivates the readers. A really solid work so far

Really appreciate it, I've read yours too, and I was glad to see that our works have some similarities hehe. I'll definitely try and make the story even better[img=recommend]

Interesting start to the story. I really like the pacing so far. Very vivid, and the descriptions for the world and characters have been perfect, it's very easy to imagine the scenes. Really like the MC too, she already seems fun, despite living a tragic life. Gonna keep reading this fr