Lavender_45

i prefer if you just delete the spells in the status window , we are have skills and skills can also be classified as high level skills and low level , you can either use [mind control ] LV 1 or [Mind Control] proficiency (F) the spells bar is just useless if you have skills bar, anyway it up to you

so far for chapter one good

To be sincere this cultivation era you bring is too boring and stressful . Am trying to understand your love for cultivation but just don’t mention it too much and let stick to mana

Can you focus more on wey because I am not really interested in the side characters

You are just turning the story into a stage acting where most characters don’t have meaning and groups no goals. As your fan this 30- and more chapters really isn’t the best at all. Just follow the usual way and stop bringing people with no actual goals having knowledge the scholars and maesters to use for what. Any way I will just keep reading maybe you will mention it later .

It good straight forward and exciting, some funny part too. 👍👍👍

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Nice

I will vote for you once I get my daily power stone

The character are well and there is no a just pop character. Love it