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Hi. I am an author. if you find this account please read my book 'Good Hunter'. My instagram account is 'dinwrites_0713' . Discord: https://discord.com/invite/NeQvEEhP

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    Of course I am going to rate my own book. If you enjoy it, let me know by leaving a review!

    The Real Legend of Ace
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  • Dinwrites_0713
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    If there is a korean version then fine, but this book is inspired by the chinese TV show. So, let's leave it there.

    Meanwhile, Mei na, who was a bit farther away from the counter, ran for her life with her short legs and still did not reach before her employee. After they both were behind the counter Mei na said, "This is the computer and that is where you scan the Identification Card."
    The Real Legend of Ace
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    It's actually inspired a lot by the chinese TV show "The King's Avatar". It's also written in the synopsis.

    Meanwhile, Mei na, who was a bit farther away from the counter, ran for her life with her short legs and still did not reach before her employee. After they both were behind the counter Mei na said, "This is the computer and that is where you scan the Identification Card."
    The Real Legend of Ace
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  • Dinwrites_0713
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    Sorry this comment wasn't supposed to be in this book. Just ignore, I thought it was my other friend's book.

    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
    The Duke's Youngest Son is a Regressor
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    When I was reading, I noticed that the started of a few sentences did not have capital letters. Please fix this issue.

    Ch 1 Cassius Blackwood [edited]
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    take over*

    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
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    And so, he made history by being the first S-rank in decades...

    "Give it up, dear. There hasn't been an S-rank in decades." Countess Fettuccine sighed.
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    T*

    These cracks were actually dungeons that contained monsters. When those monsters were released, humanity almost perished.
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    Probably an earthquake :)

    600 years ago, cracks started appearing around the world, no one knew what they were or why they appeared. Not even the empire's greatest scholars.
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    I can read this whenever I feel like reading because the updates are so constant. I hope this book gets contracted.

    Ch 35 The Hunter, The Sniper And The Silvers Part 1
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    The constant updates. I can't keep up, it's so good I guess I will have to make a reading time in my schedule.

    Ch 34 Second Round
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    The updates every day are crazy...

    Ch 30 4 Men Vs 4 Girls Part 1
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    I think when you write a line for example "Hey what's up?" Maybe you should specify who is talking with who or who said these lines like, "I am fine." Said Ryuma. Like that.

    Ch 21 Tour Guide Around The School
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    Love how everyone always flies across the room with 30 broken ribs, 5 broken bones, losing one kidney, not being able to breathe but at last the person is perfectly fine.

    "Rio~- YOU FUCKING TRAITOR!!!" Ryuma kicks Rio in the abdomen. Send him flying across the hallway. He then grabs Rio's collar and shakes him many times.
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    This story is so good. The English too, is better. Keep it up! 👍

    Ch 18 Am I thinking too much?
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    It was a good chapter. But honestly, it's too short. a chapter should atleast be 1,500 words or more. I know this from experience. When I first started writing, I did 200 words each chapter because I didn't know anything. But now I am writing atleast 1,000 words and will soon reach 1,500. Keep up the work 👍..

    Ch 14 Under the 'Blue' rain
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    I wanna be a top graduate too :(

    The Second Prince of the Herreson's Kingdom. Become a top graduate in his school last year.
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    I have read till chapter 5. It's an amazing story. Although, the English is a bit broken, I can understand what you are trying to write. Keep up the good work.

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    Hi, author here. Thanks for reading. Leave a comment will ya?

    Good Hunter
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    I know how hard it is to be an author. I an myself one. Keep up the good work. you will reach your goal soon.

    Ch 5 4. This…… Isn’t necessary right?
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