well, the point is that he didn't get a devil-fruit.

I hope you don't drop it man... you did say you don't leave things halfway so don't go back on your words... or you ain't a true Shinobi!!!!

Woah .. .. .. .. The chapters are getting better ....

It's actually pretty good. I liked the story soo far it's a great development atleast , though the author seems kinda new to writing but the story writing just carries the whole thing , atleast in my opinion

Atleast he is doing what he is , you have no right to say he is a failed writer.