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A_Dragon_Fantasy

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy14d
    respondió a Alejandro_Plaza

    You can read these two 👍👍👍 You will love it.

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    Skibidi skibidi [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

    The Sugar Mommy System: The Evil Young Master is Villain!!!
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    " I don't think Saintess came here with good intentions, correspondingly, such clothes don't suit your nature, it seems you wanted to talk to me about your rumors however, I believe in you, but, then again, you don't have to tell me such things, I don't have any interest in you, I am not the right person to discuss your life matters, "
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    Bai Lung exactly didn't knew her intention but he could guess, she wasn't here for a friendly talk which can further be backed by her negative ten ( -10 ) affection towards him.
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    He knew she wasn't here for simple talk, and her revealing clothes were nothing but a distraction.
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    She was completely different from those ornamental vases who only had pretty faces and slutty bodies to their names with big melons and squishy back hills with Iq lower than room temperature.
    The Sugar Mommy System: The Evil Young Master is Villain!!!
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    The first thing why we are here is for lemons 🍋 Writing = 😈 Plot = 😈 Mc = 😈 Character development = 😈 Mc's attitude, ego, thinking = 😈 ( he is genius when it come to making girl spread their legs )

    The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    respondió a FakeCultivator001

    You hate and biology r two different things. You said it's logical and reasonable. But it's more of fictional than the original.

    Ch 1 Chapter 5- Shopping (1)
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    respondió a FakeCultivator001

    1000 per chapter? I am talking about paragraph.

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    respondió a FakeCultivator001

    I thought you were logical, if he is going to be powerful he needs to have testrone, either keep him V or have multiple. Monogamy will won't help at all, try hormones psychology.

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    Seriously if you want to attract readers, try reading The Villain wants sect full of maidens, magic sect id beauties, seduce the master.

    Ch 1 Chapter 5- Shopping (1)
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    Change the paragraph when different people speaks.

    Ch 1 Chapter 4- Guest (2)
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    Bruh! It feels Ai. There should be a dialogue or exchange of words.

    As An Ling sat lost in thought, a man approached him respectfully, addressing him as "young master." With a heavy heart, the man revealed yet another troubling news - another worker had left, worsening the already fragile state of their workforce.
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    It feels Ai proofread.

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    Try breaking the paragraphs, it's long and words with similar meanings are repeated.

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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    Feels like Ai edited or modified.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1- Arrival
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
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    Try reading experiment 731 for guidance, sometimes common sense is dumb because most people are dumb. I got it he is from modern world but, why would he feel regret about making other work.

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