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    KWolfa year ago
    Replied to couch_god

    Thank you!

  • KWolf
    KWolfa year ago
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    I'm sorry you don't like it. But could you explain what you mean exactly?

  • KWolf
    KWolfa year ago
    Replied to MikaelZero

    I get what you mean, but I needed one of them to take the lead. Otherwise, I would've had two MCs. Would I have to give Luna her own harem? Why would a prideful being accept being in a harem without having their own? I did think about letting them both try to get the upper hand on the other for a while, but in the end, this is my first novel, and I'm not sure I'd be able to keep that up. Anyway, it's not like Luna suddenly turns into a toothless kitten with Hati. They'll still butt heads, and Luna won't always do what Hati says, but I did feel the need to establish some kind of hierarchy between them, and I used the reason for their abilities to do it because I liked the feature. Right, end of author ramblings. Thank you for the feedback! I hope you'll give the novel a try regardless.

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Shards of Sin: The Demon-Wolf

Hati was a man who had very little control over his emotions, to the point where it ruined his life. That is until he met a woman by the name of Luna. Through a mysterious connection between Luna and Hati, Hati gains back control of his emotions. After his experience of losing control of himself, combined with several betrayals, Hati develops a dominating and controlling personality. Unfortunately, he is betrayed again and ends up dying together with his wife, Luna. Follow Hati as he is reborn in a world by the name of Asgard, where he finds out the reason for his uncontrollable emotions, searches for Luna, grows stronger and fights against the forces of fate through sheer domination and strength. *********** Hey everyone, this is my first novel. I hope you all like it, but I’m always interested in constructive criticism. Before you start reading, though, let me clarify a few things. Contains some spoilers about Luna: First of all, I gave it the anti-hero tag because Hati does not have an evil master plan. That said, Hati is a guy who will do anything to protect those he cares for while generally ignoring everyone else, so a hero he is not, anti or otherwise. Luna, who will be accompanying Hati for most of the novel, is technically the same, but the only person she cares for is Hati, at least at first. Her morals are also much more villain-like than Hati’s. Secondly, the R18 stuff. Hati is generally dominant and controlling, something that will especially shine through in the first few smut chapters. That will mellow down a little, though, but the first few times are actually important for the story. Lastly, there will be no NTR, but there will be some lesdom, though never romantically. Luna simply loves to dominate other women, and she never does so without Hati’s permission. You can freely skip the R18 stuff, as I will make sure to keep any plot progression out of it. It is just for flavour. Thirdly, it’s a bit of a slow burn as Hati grows up and learns about the world, but after he finds Luna, things will pick up. Luna will then become an almost constant companion for the rest of the novel. Last but not least, I hope you enjoy reading!

KWolf · Fantasy
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