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The story is great I love the FL mother imma call her Mrs.V she’s the typical super mom has a mix of good and bad she’s not perfect which makes it realistic, I’m talking about the way her relationship with her daughter is, the way she speaks suggest tough love, I don’t like the FL she’s to braty for her age(20), I love the little daughter of the ML Liliana or liliauna I can’t remember her name but she sounds adorable, she seems cool so far as there is only six chaps, I like the ML when it comes to his daughter other than that I think he’s arrogant but hes not the worst I’ve seen so he’s a 6/10 he has a chance for character development and hopefully the Fl Do, personally I don’t like the age gap but that’s my perferance so it don’t matter, it can be different for others [img=recommend]
Absolutely loved you're other story which is why I came over hereeeeee, it's only six chapters but I love it soo farr, I've always loved stories like this so it was an automatic add, please keep it up brooo
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This comic suck, the fl is weak and always gotta be saved, she is rich but still feel inferior to her partner. She never thinks things through she's really d u m b. She's considered a commoner but doesn't even meet the standard of a commoner. The Ml is predatory hence the first chapter he took advantage of her drunk. Anyway, this is just my opinion based on reading 30 chapters so far!😂
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I would love to see this in a comiccccc formmmm
Omggg thank you