It's perfect great job

She is so huddy

Aww just look at go her little girl uncle Leonard is with you

Aww I just love the title

It's great I love the way you put up the story

The story is great hope you finish this one soon and focus on this one only but I mist say your imagination is wide 🙂🙂🙂

HMM you started a new novel not bad actually it is really good and the story Buildup is great

Yup I agree 💯💯

I love the way you put your story and the characters are really good hope you continue to write it

Aww the little girl seams cute and the way he picks her up I'm loving it ❤️❤️

Annnddd I must say the place you described was really good I like the way you put up your story and Zain and Ellie's ❤️❤️❤️

I agree I'm loving their story hope they live together 💕

I love your thankyou dance it's really cute ❤️

What an farewell man I must say it was really sad and heart warming but still let's keep up with the good work 🙂

Nice I am enjoying it but it took you Soo long to write this chapter hope you continue writing ❤️

Nice I am enjoying it but it took you Soo long to write this chapter hope you continue writing ❤️

Man you are doing great and I like your style 👍

Nice i love thier friendship and Andrews insight it's great 👍

Nit bad I like the start of your novel let's keep it going 🙂

You story is going really good and I like the way you are taking it keep up the good work