Thanks for the review. To address some of the points, the reason why he felt guilty and sorry is because he already promised to be with Yuqi. If you already had committed to your girlfriend, wouldn't you feel sorry for cheating? Especially if you literally just took her virginity less than an hour ago? It was his actual 'first' love at the moment. Of course he's going to feel wrong for not resisting harder. To address the twin sister being childish, I can't deny that you aren't wrong. But come on, everybody makes mistakes in the heat of the moment. You can't expect her to 'think' correctly when you literally just accidentally damaged your own brother's future.

Sleeping has a steady pulse, if Xiaoyun was pretending, it would of been a lot different heartbeats and pulse rates.

As much as those video shows, cervix is not really pleasurable to hit... At the end of the day, it depend person to person. For this spoiler sake, Yuqi is an outlier where she actively enjoys pain as the later story entails.

Perhaps

Oops, mixing up the shallow and deep end

Because he doesn't know the boy's left leg. He can only create things he had touched before. AKA he can only replace his left leg with right leg. (Don't question the logic or the science behind this xd)

No, think about it this way: just because a dude plays an FPS doesn't mean they're going out of their way to cause a mass shooting. Or just because someone watches murder mystery, doesn't mean they gonna start doing unsolvable murder.

My apology, I'll change it to 10.35

hehe, one major reason why i needed to change xd

Not USD, it's Yuan. (The setting is in China, not the U.S.)

thank you!

Hindsight, they still haven't used to realizing that they practically owned everything since no one lives there. (Remember when Xiaoyun tried to pay for cloths? Yeah it's take a while to get use to it xd)

True, but there's always flaws as the the book reveal later on.

She still has a civilian mindset. Think about it, a sophomore in university would do which of the following? Kill or mercy?

In the shower earlier, he couldn't make abstract things become reality.

Just like there are news reporter in warzones, there are always journalist who's daring enough to bring the news to the public.

Just not the most secure rope in the world.

A lot of news reporters are already in the country they are assigned to for months or even years. It's not like they flew there just for one news segment.

Well, the legality of such a level of experiment... It's pretty self-explanatory why it's paused.

yep. thats it.