Dhruv_Gupta_3469

Excited to see where the journey takes him, hopefully engages with westoros and not just intracting with OCs

Tftc

Bruhhhh

It’s too repetitive, you use the same lines multiple times

Wow!!! one of the best fic i have read on this platform (atleast until chap 190). It's unique and the technique part is chef's kiss

Did it really need a whole chapter to explain one seal 🙁🫤

kind of an underwhelming entry

yay i am ended up reading a naruto original story with a cool back ground character, things that don't make sense and an old guy being op as hell, and again all of these changes would lead to exactly the same end with an even more powerful background character that doesn't do shit until final battle, which i am sure will come in like 500 more chapters. YAY!!!!

This one thing I dislike about fanfics, is that authors don't want to go outside canon i mean what's the point of all that setting up of different op techniques and being an S rank, if u just use your a strong technique like flying thunder to travel. I mean the entire village is about to be destroyed and his kinda mentor dying but mc doesn't do anything so he can somewhat guess the future, what an absolute coward

personal attack 💔