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Tactical_Make_out

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I'm new so any tips, ideas, and criticism helps.

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    Naruto: Time Traveler
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    Publicado por

    This is my honest opinion as the writer of this fic as of 3/10/2024. Thanks to all who have read and commented. I hope you enjoy my first fic that I actually try my best on. If there are any problems let me know.

    Kakashi: A Better Sensei
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a itagaku

    Thanks, I will resume the story tomorrow.

    Ch 2 Nah I'd Win
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a Heavenly_Devil

    Oh, thanks for the explanation.

    As you can see, I chose the Copy Ninja Kakashi Hatake, the person's strength that I chose to superimpose was Sakumo Hatake. There were options that would have made me stronger but would have been impossible to explain. An example of a stronger choice would be Itachi, giving me the Uchiha bloodline making me have overall stronger abilities. 
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    Comentado por

    This is OP done so right and so wrong at the same time.

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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a itagaku

    When I say supporting character I mean he will focus on helping team seven, but doesn't mean he won't try to improve. He just won't reach Hashirama level or higher. He is op, but not to the point as a main character would be by fighting the people considered gods 1v1. He can still be highly helpful.

    Ch 2 Nah I'd Win
    Kakashi: A Better Sensei
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a Isaiah_Brogdon

    I probably will have him learn sage mode to actually help better for the war. Do you think that would be best?

    Ch 2 Nah I'd Win
    Kakashi: A Better Sensei
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a Isaiah_Brogdon

    Good Idea, but I like how it doesn't turn off. It holds him back so he has to be a supporting character which I want.

    Ch 2 Nah I'd Win
    Kakashi: A Better Sensei
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a Isaiah_Brogdon

    Any idea recommendations?

    Ch 2 Nah I'd Win
    Kakashi: A Better Sensei
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a Isaiah_Brogdon

    Thanks.

    Ch 2 Nah I'd Win
    Kakashi: A Better Sensei
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a Swikong

    Tbh, I don't understand anything you just said.

    As you can see, I chose the Copy Ninja Kakashi Hatake, the person's strength that I chose to superimpose was Sakumo Hatake. There were options that would have made me stronger but would have been impossible to explain. An example of a stronger choice would be Itachi, giving me the Uchiha bloodline making me have overall stronger abilities. 
    Kakashi: A Better Sensei
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a kamran_ein

    Thanks, but don't expect too much.

    Kakashi: A Better Sensei
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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a CthulhuRlyeh

    complete boredom is how

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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a shadow_wolf_4141

    Too complicated

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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a Racheal_Morris

    Thanks for the idea. Though I don't know much about scythes

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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    Comentado por

    () means chosen

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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
    respondió a DaoistszUkcH

    How tf can you tell his race? You saying he white is racist. If he is, so what? I know hella white and black people who sound and speak the same. I ain't read this so maybe he said something crazy about black people that ain't true but don't be saying someone isn't what they claim 2B without proof.

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    Tactical_Make_out3mth
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    Honestly, I don't expect this to be anywhere near good. My first fic, I don't know much about writing so give me any pointers on what to fix or add to make it better. Thanks. Need to go do my research, hehe. Bye.

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    Tactical_Make_out4mth
    Comentado por

    Coulda at least use a non peto to say that

    Hisoka, with a pained expression, replies, "It's a father's duty to protect his son."
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    Tactical_Make_out4mth
    respondió a DarkKnife69TT

    I genuinely enjoy op mc. Why read struggles when there are enough in life.

    Ch 2 2 Years
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