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NAY! We are grammar BANDITS!!

welcome to a novel whose name is actually "The Touch", where we just do a rehash of that one animated transformers movie about the origin of Optimus prime that nobody cares to watch because the author can't think of an original story to write so they are stalling for time, burning more of it than the actual movie that they are putting into text is long.

also happens to be a human weakness

I have at least broken this part of their language. you see he said "I'll see you there" which is then interpreted in her mind along the lines of "get away, I don't want to be seen walking there with you" or something to that effect.

or Google translate

+1

writing Quality (3/5): feels like it's run through MTL software. though they don't switch people's gender willy nilly, or if they do it's not that often. story development (4/5): immortal, cool. potential goth robo girlfriend. transformers are cool in general. character design (4/5): I don't think anyone can hate a big robot regardless of personality. MC actually tries to avoid conflict like he says he wants instead of charging head long into it saying "OH WOE IS ME, LEAVE ME BE!!!!" while he is killing entire families in the middle of the day in plain view of his enemies and the allies of the people he is killing. so better than most on the platform. updating stability (2/5): does update relatively frequently, but the chapters are relatively short and there aren't many when released. (so it's just a personal preference that isn't met, not bad otherwise). world background (5/5): BIG.. ALIEN.. ROBOTS. no more need be said.