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At first, the author's work was quite interesting, but later, instead of improving their level, the author only lowered it. The most noticeable decline in the quality of the plot occurs after the author decided it would be a good idea to introduce time travel. I want to say that I am not against time travel, especially since it is canonical, but the way it was implemented here is simply terrible. The Rouran arc was literally created for the sake of a single joke and to spoil the further plot for readers. The Rouran plot has no impact because the author decided to erase (seal) everyone's memory, including the main character. This means that the arc, spanning around 20 chapters, has no impact and was added just for one dumb joke. After this horrible arc, the author decides that they haven’t ruined the story enough. So, they abandon the main feature of the book. Now, instead of training students to grow stronger, the main character decides to train using a dragon's vein. He sends his students back to their villages and stays behind to train on the dragon's vein. Thus, a book with an interesting premise, where the main character progresses along with the growth of their students' strength, turned into an ordinary cultivation story. To summarize: a typical Chinese work — an interesting idea with poor execution.

There was a lot of nonsense before this, but it was relatively tolerable. However, what the author turned the transformation jutsu into is quite different. I have only two guesses as to how he came up with this: first, either the author has very little understanding of the world of Naruto, or secondly, the author has a unique vision of the Naruto universe. Either way, it's a skip

It feels like the protagonist doesn't know anything about this world. He constantly asks questions that have already been answered in the anime and is always looking for something in the library. However, 90% of what he finds and reads there has already been shown in the anime. When comparing the coefficient of lost time with the usefulness of the information received, this 10% of unknown information is not worth it. It would be much more effective for him to spend that time on training instead.

Another "genius" move from the author without any background the author reduced the training from 6 to 3 years and for the "elite" class to 2 years is... This is bullshit!

I don't know who wrote this, but it's definitely a genius statement: "The Hokage's shock was doubled, because the amount of chakra that Kaida possessed was almost twice as much as Yomi's, and ten times more than the original amount that everyone unlocks." But why did the author decide that the amount of chakra at awakening would be the same for everyone? I’m 100% sure that the chakra reserves of an orphan, who doesn't eat well, whose body, therefore, develops worse, and who has never been trained, will be significantly lower. In short, it’s unlikely that they will have a lot of chakra. And if we compare ordinary children with the children of clans who are trained from early childhood—and let me remind you that chakra is a combination of physical and mental energy—then there will be a really significant gap. This is not even taking into account the special medicines and techniques that help clan children develop better, including various medical ninjutsu. Moreover, if we consider that children from noble clans often have special bloodlines or better genetic heritage, then it is simply impossible to compare them on the same level. According to canon, the amount of chakra and its potential depend on several factors: 1. **Genetics and Bloodline Limits (Kekkei Genkai):** Many clans possess unique abilities that greatly enhance their chakra reserves and control. For example, the Uzumaki clan is known for their incredibly large chakra reserves and strong life force, which allows them to use advanced sealing techniques. Similarly, the Senju clan is known for their powerful chakra and vitality, which are passed down through generations. 2. **Training and Experience:** Ninja from prestigious clans are often trained from a young age. For example, the Hyuga clan trains its members in the use of the Byakugan and Gentle Fist, a style of combat that requires precise chakra control. This training greatly improves their chakra reserves and control from an early age. 3. **Special Techniques and Medicines:** Clan children often have access to resources that help them increase their chakra reserves and physical abilities. The Akimichi clan, for instance, uses special pills to temporarily enhance their chakra and physical strength. These types of aids are usually unavailable to ordinary children or orphans. 4. **Physical and Mental Health:** Chakra is a combination of physical and mental energy. A person who is undernourished and lacks proper physical training will naturally have less chakra. This is why ninja who train both their minds and bodies from an early age are much more powerful. 5. **Role of Tailed Beasts:** Certain individuals, like Naruto Uzumaki, have an enormous amount of chakra due to the presence of a tailed beast. This is an exceptional case that significantly skews the comparison. In conclusion, in light of the above facts, the statement that everyone unlocks the same amount of chakra regardless of external factors is utterly ridiculous. This disparity is influenced by genetics, upbringing, training, and available resources.

It's a piece of rubbish, full of nonsense and Chinese...................................... .............................................................. .......

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P.S English is not my first language, so please forgive any mistakes.

Not a bad robot, well-written with an interesting plot and characters. The main downside is the very slow pace of the story: the first 16 chapters cover literally one day (or one night, if we talk about the protagonist's original world). I don't think I need to explain how many chapters it will take for something relatively interesting to start happening.