FateFracturer

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thank you for the feedback, actually the info in the starting was very important as it create a path for future development.

Hello Brothers and Females, I am the Author of this story. Here are some things you need to know about me and maybe about this novel too .... hehehe. 1)To start, this is my first time writing a novel which means that I might make some mistakes here and there, so I will be looking forward on getting any feedback. 2)I know many of you will probably not even gonna start this story because of tags like #Harem #R18 because of the bad reputation of these tags now a days, but believe me there will be no Pokémon collecting (Harem) shit with my MC here and I assure you that all this will not be forced and will not ruin the story. 3)This novel will be long and I hope you will at least try to read the first few chapters of this novel to decide whether it is for you or not. 4)I am excited about this journey. My writing skills and my writing experience will only grow as I write this book. 5)Please point out if you find any errors in this book. 6)Last but not least I hope you will enjoy reading this novel since I am writing to share my imagination to you all.

thankyou for you comment and about not reading it after its contracted well that is a talk for future as i can guarantee that you not be able to leave this novel, not after the type of story development it gonna get.

hehehe ..... thankyou

please read following chapter to know this.

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Man I love this story but the way you write, it's just too uptight, I mean who talk to an enemy with that level of elegance, it's like you are writing a play for opera or something, and there is that sentence that comes again and again "thrilled to explore this new world and experience everything it has to offer." this sentence is almost every chapter before c85 and sometimes it is more than one time in a chapter, and there is this sentence or line that you right in every new paragraph "there heart filled with anticipation and thriller for what to come" I mean come on man don't be so uptight. And don't try too much. The story is good and has way more potential than what you are presenting and please if possible change that uptight writing style. I hope this novel will become one of the best on the platform.