Someone who can't get over his youthful times, wishing it was.... Full of violence?
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In simple terms, enjoy your time writing, don't take it as a long challenge but something that you can look back and be happy for entertaining others with satisfaction.
At first, during the start it was focused on portraying sophistication which was both broad with different perspective yet not completely complex, rather it was entertaining-ly–connected like a bonsai tree; controlled and not too outgoing with using its methods, in simple terms it was done well without doing anything complications of: adding descriptions, flashback from different perspective that is either short in details or in contrast something that might even be able to span two chapters, and focusing too much on different aspects (such as pov, vague implications, adding too much connected stories, and fortifying the drama through obvious events that might seem continue on but never really progressing) much unlike some few fanfics. Though on the second part of this Fanfic, in comparison to your other one which leaves broad ideas hanging along with blurry grasp of stsnd in the universe, it is quite detailed and more focused on building climax, which is impressive at most. So with utmost sincerity, I hope you continue with this Fanfic, and hey! You might even get both of your Fanfics amount your "collection record and powerstones" combined to help you leave a lasting impression that is hard to come by in the Fanfics of Webnovel.
Baby boy? Or baby girl? Poll on the comments pls... Or secret option: "Twins!!?" (dun dun duhh!!🎶)
WTF.... After Millennials.... It has returned
Ee u a i a i i u a i ("thank you for the happiest year of my life🎶") 😂
Fuck!! Spoke too soon on the last chapter (I like typing you see and blabbering)
What a happy old (married?) couple. [When's the wedding?]
Well... Until online gambling arrives, plus I think not of the horrors if the... Incident of late 2019~2023... Is canon there also
Bro's gonna get his G.pass taken from him by the Big G himself.
Luke should strike back with a Nuclear Alarm (alarm) instead.