NFLT

A month since this masterpiece was created. And I can't stop reading it over and over again.

Author-san, I have a question or idea (Or is it more of a favor? Request?). When chapter five onwards is published, I wanted to know if a thread could be made on (Ao3) the comments about said chapter with people. Things like what might happen in the next chapter, speculation, sharing data or information that some might have overlooked, things that might or might not happen in the future, etc. (If that doesn't bother you, of course) What I want to achieve with this is that while waiting for chapters, users could see the comments about the story and join together to pass the time until the arrival of what they expected. Well, this isn't Spacebattles but I think you get the idea. Well, that's all I want to say. I have a good day Author-san ^_^

After reading the four chapters many times these days, I now managed to notice a slight change in chapter one, apart from that, I see the first two chapters more organized and the comfort when reading them is now noticeable. In my opinion, I like it a lot, well done. PD(Long): So, will you try to do the same with the other two chapters? Personally, I like the context of those chapters as they are, but I read some comments about chapter 4, but as you had said yourself, a rewrite can be done in the future. But putting that aside, I'm still impressed by the work you've done in a short time, you have my praise again, author-san. ^_^

This may be a silly question, but what do you mean by "Format the text"?

The chapter is perfect, don't worry, you did it very well, personally I am satisfied with everything. My favorite part was without a doubt the scene with Roxy and Sub-, wait, it's Rudeus, right? :) I can already see the importance this exchange will have and more. Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to the next one!

I'm watching it on Ao3, but I'll leave my comment here. You're doing well, keep it up. You have my support. Percent, the touch of originality you gave in the presentation of Rudeus (Subaru) to Roxy was perfect.