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    QA_Wizard9 months ago
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    This is a cold review, meaning I have not finished reading all available chapters, I'm currently done with chapter 10. Will update as needed. The overall reading experience is okay. I can parse it fine, with no unpassable grammar mistakes, but the way it's written is kind of mediocre. Needs a lot of polish, I guess. The story seems low effort so far, mostly because characters with established traits bend to make space to "show how persuasive and competent" the main character is. Overall I'm considering this to be a low-effort wish fulfillment shonen story. But I have to articulate this, the novel is free of charge, so I have no idea how much time the writer has or how much interest he has invested in this novel, namely if its a passion project, something to pass the time or if he's trying to write something good.

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    QA_Wizarda year ago
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    From a writing point of view this is decent, however his/her grammar is below what you would expect from a highschooler. In regards to updates the novel has been without updates for over a year but I wouldn't penalize more than 2 stars since you have at least 50ish chapter to read and update schedule shouldn't be a factor in regards to the novel's grade. Story is decent overall, If a bit bland and evolves at a digerable phase . I'm also docking more points because the author doesn't bother to set the backgrounds properly. Overall looks like a low effort fanfic to me.

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    QA_Wizarda year ago
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    Readable but exceptionally cringy. 0 attention to details, no world construction while the plot is as shallow as a pornhwa. On this site though, that's basically a 4 overall.

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    QA_Wizarda year ago
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    Nothing amazing here. Writing level is basic, the chapters themselves being a bit stale. Written in English, but lacks proficiency beyond a high school homework level. Probably an amateur translator or a heavy edited mtl. There's at least 100 chapters so there some stuff to read, but I honestly don't recommend it unless you have time to waste. MC is boring, being a law/rule abiding slytherin with the emotional range of a toaster. But that being said, it's still probably in the top half of novels on this damn site.