Aki_Kure

Hahaha, that's foul, man. It was just a missing 'n' making a 'Lei Feg.' You seriously made me think twice about what kind of substance I appeared to be on for not noticing the mistake in the draft. Still, thanks for the correction. Should be all right now.

In life’s final moments, even those who chased their dreams may feel deep regret. While they achieved what they wanted, the pursuit often hurt those they loved. As they look back, they might wish they had chosen connections over ambitions, realizing that the joy of seeing their loved ones smile would have been worth more than any personal success. In that moment, the desire to repair those relationships can outweigh the fulfillment of their dreams.

Well, it's just that writing the word 'testament' was my preference. I felt that the word itself held more power than if I were to write 'evidence' or 'proof.' Sorry if my writing preference confused you. And on a side note, I'm still enjoying all your reactions, man—especially during the death of Hong Yi. It's just too funny

Well, I would certainly love to hear reviews. And when you mention suggestions, I’m not sure if that falls under reviews or a different type of suggestion.

Exciting news! In line with the Second Writing Sprint Event, I'll be updating with two chapters a day for the next 21 days, starting from September 5th until September 25th. Prepare for lots of new content and twists as the story picks up momentum. Stay tuned, and thank you for your continued support!

Well, being a fraud is a matter of perspective—at least, that’s how I aim to utilize it. My answer might be a bit vague, so I apologize in advance. Since the recent chapters I posted have uncovered this concept, I can say that the portrayal and the idea of the MC being a fraud will always be present. I wrote it so that the MC constantly struggles with the belief that he’s a fake, while the people around him argue that he’s the real deal. I’d say the true resolution of this concept will come at the end of the story, where there’s acceptance. And a change in belief.

I never planned on any of that "power of friendship" stuff at all. Still, it’s up to each reader to perceive a scene as they wish, but I certainly don’t plan to include it. Of course, this story will portray friendship and love, but I can confidently say there won’t be any of that "power of friendship" plot armour.

Spot on, my friend. Despite Luke's choice to live in solitude, he has a simple mind and a one-track way of thinking—very much like a teenager. But now is the moment for him to learn, grow, and act. This new world and environment will force him to adapt and make choices. Whatever he does will determine his future.

After finishing the draft, I originally made Tora a female tiger. However, a new idea—or a logical reasoning—came to mind, and I decided to change Tora to a male. It seems I missed some instances where the pronoun wasn't updated correctly. I apologize for any confusion this may have caused, and I appreciate you pointing it out. Thank you!

Thanks for your feedback! Let me clarify a couple of points: Luke’s Behavior: Luke isn't the brightest—he actually failed school—and he's just been thrown into this foreign world. He’s not really aware of the risks of revealing he’s an outsider, so his lack of caution is more due to ignorance and impulsiveness. Gareth’s Reaction: Gareth doesn’t get suspicious because he’s seen Luke do things that align with his faith as a Noirist. In his belief system, people who can perform extraordinary feats, like mages, are revered. So, he assumes Luke might be one of these special individuals, which is why he’s more curious than cautious. Fairly enough, this is what I kept in mind when writing that part. I hope this helps explain their actions. And if you find it still wrong, then just blame me on my writing ignorance.