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ErioMillionz3dComentado porCh 1 1 letter.- ErioMillionz1mthrespondió a RemoWilliams
That's his secret to tell. Don't wanna be a snitch 😂 But yeah! He's not!
"No! I'm not going to put that disgusting liquid on my body." - ErioMillionz1mthComentado por
That's his secret to tell. Don't wanna be a snitch 🤣 But yeah, he's not!
"No! I'm not going to put that disgusting liquid on my body." - ErioMillionz3mthPublicado por
Writing quality, dope! Update stability, well, it's still too early to judge but, so far, it's consistent. About the character design, not gonna lie, I read only chapter one so far and its hard to tell since it's a dream. But I think he'll be dope if he comes out to be like how he acted in this nightmare. Keep it up, author! I'll update this review according to how the story will grows.
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I actually liked the plot twist at the end. Keep it up!
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Such an intriguing first chapter and storyline! Keep it coming, author! Would like to read more of this book... and highly recommend it to anyone who's into dark things.
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- ErioMillionz6mthrespondió a Rebeccah_Herdener
Because he's a snitch by blood🤣
"Don't be angry with your sibling. He is wise and knows what you want." - ErioMillionz6mthrespondió a Sinful_Cyanide
Yeah! She still doesn't trust him. When she does, you'll see how submissive she can become.
She gave him a strange look and replied, "The system is called satisfy me, don't you remember? I made it so I can be happy. That's why everything the host will do will be in line of satisfying my desires." - ErioMillionz6mthrespondió a Sinful_Cyanide
Yeah! She was alive. However, not physical. She had lost her physical form so she could hide from the gods during the war. Plus, we still don't know if she loved God of Desires.
"Because of his powers and his inhuman lust, no human female ever survived his wrath on the bed. Getting selected meant death. These girls felt wronged. Because everything was poisonous after the war, their families would offer them him so he could give them a sapling and a handful of soil to plant it into. - ErioMillionz6mthrespondió a Rebeccah_Herdener
I also read it like that when I was editing. Btw, thanks for the vote!
'Whatever!' - ErioMillionz7mthrespondió a Daoists7udMy
He will of course come back and do that.
"Of course no! You will be able to come back to complete quests like I do." - ErioMillionz7mthrespondió a Joethedeath
Oh! Poor me! I thought it was something I needed to correct. I mean, I literally reread the whole chapter asking myself, where's it? 😂 Glad to hear it was just a comment for fun. Thank you!
"I'm not ready for that kind of penetration yet!" - ErioMillionz7mthrespondió a Joethedeath
I don't understand. I mean, I'm not seeing where this is written so I can correct it.
"I'm not ready for that kind of penetration yet!" - ErioMillionz7mthrespondió a Joethedeath
Thank you!
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Speechless!
His sudden moves on her butt forced her to curve her body, sticking the said butt in the air for his fingers to have access on her flower which was dripping with a delicious liquid only Byron had once took a sip on. - ErioMillionz7mthrespondió a SHADOWBLADE
😂
That day, they had been playing near the cliff when Gillian accidentally pushed him. - ErioMillionz8mthrespondió a Alanray64
Thank you so much! My keyboard just loves what whenever I try to write want. It gives me a headache when I'm editing.
"See," the Goddess of Beauty was excited. "You what this so let me help you!" - ErioMillionz8mthrespondió a Alanray64
I used outburst to mean 'a sudden release of strong emotion.'
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