Karfin2422

So far it’s amazing

So far very good, translator is doing a good job correcting and improving the story

I think it’s I’m already a jonin and the system just came.

+1

Tonari has been renamed to sharen pls change back author Ty

Still haven’t fixed last chapter

Wrong book

The writing is well structured and has good grammar. But the development of the story is wayyyyyy too fast, the author took what should have been 1-2 chapters and condensed it into a paragraph. Plus the plot holes, like how does he know he is Aphrodite’s son and how does he know the world he’s in. There’s too much telling and not a lot of showing and the speed it wayyy to damn fast.

Repeat chapter

It’s like they took every Chinese novel took out all the parts that the readers didn’t like and then fused them together to create this story. It’s like every cliche, broken engagement, can’t cultivate but it’s actually a super op body, reincarnated super expert, really arrogant for literally no reason.