Quite a short chapter. It seems that you are not into the story too, aren't you?

If you can't picturise the masterpiece called Overlord in your story, then no problem. It happens to everyone. Better make a story that belongs solely to you.

A cliffhanger? I don't like this story. You better abandon it.

Still a rushed pacing. Put a little bit more effort on your pacing. Try to slow it down.

The fight ended too fast. Better make it more action like. I am also confused at the rushed pacing.

The story is good, but it is kinda boring now. It doesn't attract that much attention as it should. You better drop it and do something about your Grammer first.