Akasha_N_Twilight

the story is repetitive and thus boring basically an overpowered protagonist goes to area a kills everything goes to area b meets a beautiful girl thats in awe of his strength goes to area c similar thing happens there is no room for character development when it is impossible for anything bad to happen to mc

nah Endurance should if he was a female itd be a different story

i dont have many problems with it other than the fact that it is almost impossible to read the grammar is fxcked basically this would be perfect with an editor basically

this whole thing is kinda confusing to read

cringe the fxcking cringe what wisdom he is deadass ogling you does your power make you stupid

on my life please let this be a joke

ahhhhhhthis fxckin

i just cant isnt a secret best kept the less it is known and even if he didnt need to he wary of gods it is always a bad idea imo to not hide at least a modicum of your power since humans are subject to change

please dont make him a pervertand please dont make him a doormat

i would stay a normal human lifetime if i was granted extra powers for my troubles