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Next chapter might take a while, since I want to stack them for now. Anyways, what do you think of this chapter?
I'm back! Anyways: It will be 3rd POV from now on. It's hard to use 1st POV to someone like Yu, who was always emotionless and apathetic.
Took me a while to write this one, since I was very busy, but fortunately I still manage. I will still try to keep the 3 chapters update for this week, but I can't promise. Anyways, what do you think of this chapter?
Excellent story, I have no words. Keep up the pace, I hope to see more.
Great story, excelelent writing quality, great and likeable Main Character with a mindset that perfectly fits within Reverend Insanity world. No word other than Masterpiece.
Pretty good read. Binge read it until the latest. There's some boring parts because some of the canon still happened despite the butterfly effect but it's bearable. Mc was likeable, good but not too much. He put up a mask but so far, he doesn't look like one that will turn evil. Romance was done well imo. It builds up pretty well and not just s*x after one chapter.
This is good, one of the unique GOT fanfiction that I've read. The story was done well and realistic but the pacing was really slow. Rody was one of the protagonist that I've like despite not having any ambition. He is loyal and persistent. His battle prowess came from training consistently and not on lucky encounter. World background was decent. Writing Quality was good but sometimes there are unnecessary words in paragraphs which made me skim some while reading. 4.2/5
Good Game of Thrones fanfiction. decent Mc with likeable but still doesn't stand out. The story was decent with really slow pacing. The writing quality was great and the chapters were long. World Building were also decent. 4.2/5
I will update it soon, just getting back to writing again.
I wrote this story based on all the things I like in a story. Hope you all enjoy it.