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Yalatola4hrespondió a Ayomide_AlobaThe POVs were initially switching between 1st and 3rd POV according to the personas of Dora in control, (it's back to normal after chapter 31 so please bear with it just a little), but I understood it was a bad idea so I am currently in the process of re-editing every chapter until 31
Ch 24 Quest- Yalatola1drespondió a Terrom
The best decision would have been to follow Thomas' plan, but you've resumed the only problem: this Sin a child in mind and was formatted by the others, so they ended regretting when confronted with the facts. The plan would have worked if they could have been monsters till the end.
"It's over, he's gone." - Yalatola1drespondió a Terrom
answer: yes
"Really? So we'll finally see Dora? We'll see him, right mom??" The woman's tired eyes smiled at her as she embraced her. - Yalatola1drespondió a Terrom
I give you a big warning: the following 14 chapters will make your blood boil, but trust me, everything that will happen is the base of a great final arc. I'm here in case you need more information, even spoilers if you can't take it anymore.
"Really? So we'll finally see Dora? We'll see him, right mom??" The woman's tired eyes smiled at her as she embraced her. - Yalatola1drespondió a TerromCh 138 Honor Or Foolishness?
- Yalatola1drespondió a TerromCh 138 Honor Or Foolishness?
- Yalatola5drespondió a Terrom
The true Dora, you'll understand in future chapters (aka 120-184)
|Beta: 23% - Yalatola6drespondió a TymSpiritwolf
yeah👍
But he was far from being weak, he just needed to be a twig at that moment to complete his freedom. - Yalatola6drespondió a TymSpiritwolf
two people told me the mc wasn't op on discord, look the current trending, good books nowadays must have op mc beating everything from the beginning
But he was far from being weak, he just needed to be a twig at that moment to complete his freedom. - Yalatola6drespondió a TymSpiritwolf
We never know what was on the plan of the author, I too am a reader so as a writer I know what I want and what I'm tired to see. I know where this story is going and I have no intention to write another cliche here to milk the story over thousand chapters.
But he was far from being weak, he just needed to be a twig at that moment to complete his freedom. - Yalatola6drespondió a TymSpiritwolf
If you think it was good you should trust the author in what he's doing.
But he was far from being weak, he just needed to be a twig at that moment to complete his freedom. - Yalatola9drespondió a William_Claw
I see
"You… Why did you join the Academy? There's no way someone like Lady Elizabeth would recommend you for no reason. Why are you so weak?" - Yalatola9drespondió a William_Claw
I understand, I'll change that then, thanks
"Oh? she didn't say to thou? I be surprised, considering thou art her brother, Hope, yet 'tis true. A few years since, I got thy sister to join when she was merely E-rank, and today she is doing the like. Is not this a form of cycle? 'tis like I be receiving mine grandchildren, fufu" - Yalatola9drespondió a William_Claw
don't know what is legion but ok
"You… Why did you join the Academy? There's no way someone like Lady Elizabeth would recommend you for no reason. Why are you so weak?" - Yalatola10drespondió a CaredevilCh 20 A Body Of Their Own
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Dora 11 years old
Este libro ha sido eliminado. - Yalatola22drespondió a Trevor_Anderson_6429Ch 4 The Heroine and the Genius
- Yalatola23drespondió a Trevor_Anderson_6429
many things happens in the shadow
"You shouldn't underestimate the abnormal nature of a true Avatar." - Yalatola23drespondió a Trevor_Anderson_6429Ch 4 The Heroine and the Genius