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These break the TTS, which may turn away a lot of people from your story
Think this is incomplete
Honestly thought I had already made a review,😅. So far the novel has been pretty consistent, (@ 13 chapters). This is kinda a wait and see thing, hopefully it continues. Wiring quality and pacing is good (imo). I like that you didn’t make him hate leylin for no reason. ( I would have been down regardless tho) Making the verse a slight A by increasing the strength of the named ranks is also a cool idea. Overall enjoyable read would recommend. Lowkey wanted him to take the bloodline path. Haven’t read a ff with one yet. Goodluck with your writing.
+1 just go to war bro
Always nice to get a new WMW fic. It is enjoyable so far, feel free to give it a try.
Welcome back! There are a few clones/spin-off of this novel n its concept. However this one is the best, I recommend giving it a go. Also it was never dropped* but the author had problems with W.N.
No gender bending. Maybe you think the symbiote is venom n was gender bent? But now where does it say that the symbiote is venom. It’s a completely different symbiote
If you are back im back, lets go.
I came from your uchiha fan fic, and I realized i enjoy your writing style. I also enjoy your MC’s, your ideas seem to be more unique than what is mostly found here. I hope you keep writing. This novel is a good read, give it a try and see if you like it. I am always of the opinion you should read a few chapter before passing judgement.
Pretty cool read, i have only seen this storyline in one other story. However this one seems to be moving along at a faster pace, while keeping a good amount of detail. Hive it a try and see if its your cup of tea. MC Smart Driven Cold-Hearted Powerful Im not the best with descriptions, just give it a read, and drop if you don't like, if you do like it then stick around.