Sumit_Indi

sorry for being harsh but it's truth. I just want you to improve with your experience. as this novel had insanely good potential but it got ruined in later parts. anyways good luck

below mid, 50 chapters and still paralogue. disappointing as hell. mc is far too stupid who could get caught in 4 year old boys scheme, not to mention a 4 year old boy can have intelligence enough to outsmart mc who has lived a life of adult ha a big let down by author who couldn't grasp how the folow of story should go and made it from interesting to boring (shit to be exact ) tho I know writing a novel is hard, but this novel is just abomination in every sense as mc is too pathetic and author even made mc behave like 4 year child. mc who has gone through so much in his previous life could be tricked by little boy. kinda too far fetched nonsense

good start but you need to correct some misunderstanding here first author I still can't understand if that elf is lady or man cuz you used male pronoun for elf and still said she had bigger boobs than normal human please fix it or it might just ruin reading experience to another level

insanely inhuman details sorry author but I am only human after all! so I can't read your novel cuz I am just normal human

I didn't give you 5 stars in writing quality cuz the way story is written in pov is kinda dragging and consumes many chapters but it is incridible piece of work I can't even start to describe how good story turned out later on especially at first glimpse of castle's horror. as I am reading it in midnight it gave me goosebumps

one of the best novels I have read thanks author for creating such a good novel

what author meant by giving shot to 5 chapters is that you should read 5 chapters only for you to realise that you will lose interest in this novel btw mc is beta and dense which is most hated type of mc

sorry author but your mc is pure shit. and I have to give it to you for writing one of the worst mc's. and yeh I have to drop it cuz seeing how you are making mc slave to system and making seem like computer. all in all you forgot that there was still clay as well who has pure emotions and you gave mc only one personality of calculator, till now I didn't like your mc even a bit. atleast you should have written mc somewhat better with some more maturity. you know everyone hates seeing dense bi*ch mc who leavs everything to fate in matters of relationship.

mc is kinda trash. that's enough reason to make whole novel below average. sorry author but here mc is just spineless and system behaviour with mc is shit yet he still says sorry. this is worst interaction. this mc looks more miserable than those system slaves mc

up until now everything is just perfect. I have to say this novel is really good one. beside I think there could be some improvement in pace as It's already 300 + chapters but mc is not too strong as he focuses on some irrelevant stuff.