Old_Rabbit

The drama and conflict are just jokes between Tang Hao who misunderstood and attacked Spirit Hall continuously, even the combination of the Golden Crocodile were beaten by Tang Hao, this is really strange, even Qian Daoliu looks like an idiot when facing Tang Hao. The author only continues to use the absurd Spirit Hall and Tang Hao fight scenes to fill the fight chapter. I mean the conflict between the MC and the Shrek people is very rare, the author deliberately delays time with the excuse that the MC still can't face Tang Hao, it's just nonsense with the presence of Yun Yun who is able to kill Tang Hao. The MC is just busy collecting the harem. This is not worth it for those looking for exciting conflicts, because so far it's really all just jokes. This is just a harem collection fanfic, and what makes more not make sense is that the MC insists on including Bibi Dong in his harem when he already has Xiaowu. The MC just said "I will revive your mother so I want you to not bring up Spirit Hall and not hate them, besides while in Notting academy you received benefits from Spirit Hall", that's really a stupid analogy. Her mother was killed and just because he promised to revive her mother he asked Xiaowu not to hate the party that killed her mother, even if Xiaowu agreed what about Xiaowu's mother's response would the MC just tell her to do the same thing? Stupid really stupid just because this is a farming harem he wrote a broken plot like this. Okay, now the MC will talk about the "misunderstanding" nonsense again so that he can pick up a harem from Zhuqing and Zhuyun's feud, what a plot that is continuously recycled and forced. And the most annoying thing is that MC keeps letting Yu Xiaogang and his gang act as they please. MC just acts mysteriously by saying that he still wants to play with Yu Xiaogang and his gang so he doesn't beat Yu Xiaogang and his gang even when they do annoying things, all of that is done by MC just because he wants to hide his soul ring configuration to surprise Yu Xiaogang and his gang

The MC is just busy picking up the harem, even the contents of the harem are too absurd. The author emphasizes too much on how Xiaowu's harem option could be with Bibi Dong. The drama and conflict are just jokes between Tang Hao who misunderstood and attacked Spirit Hall continuously, even the combination of the Golden Crocodile and Jiang brothers were beaten by Tang Hao, this is really strange, even Qian Daoliu looks like an idiot when facing Tang Hao. The author only continues to use the absurd Spirit Hall and Tang Hao fight scenes to fill the fight chapter. I mean the conflict between the MC and the Shrek people is very rare, the author deliberately delays time with the excuse that the MC still can't face Tang Hao, it's just nonsense with the presence of Yun Yun who is able to kill Tang Hao. The MC is just busy collecting the harem. This is not worth it for those looking for exciting conflicts, because so far it's really all just jokes. This is just a harem collection fanfic, and what makes more not make sense is that the MC insists on including Bibi Dong in his harem when he already has Xiaowu. The MC just said "I will revive your mother so I want you to not bring up Spirit Hall and not hate them, besides while in Notting academy you received benefits from Spirit Hall", that's really a stupid analogy. Her mother was killed and just because he promised to revive her mother he asked Xiaowu not to hate the party that killed her mother, even if Xiaowu agreed what about Xiaowu's mother's response would the MC just tell her to do the same thing? Stupid really stupid just because this is a farming harem he wrote a broken plot like this.

Actually there is nothing that can threaten the MC again from the Spirit Hall, Qian Daoliu might not be able to even if he fought the MC with Golden Crocodile. Besides, Qian Daoliu must guide Qian Renxue for the Divine Examination so he will not intervene directly.

The story suddenly jumped? And there is something damaged from the MC brain he has many skills points but He did not arouse his sharingan into EMS.

Ok there is something really annoying in this story, MC has a system, ok. The MC system can increase its cultivation by triggering emotions from others to the MC. This means that the MC has 2 paths that can make the cultivation increase, it should be, but for 6 years after the time skip graduated from the Notting Academy MC cultivation is still equivalent to characters such as Tang San, Zhuqing etc. Even though the MC also practiced personally. Even abilities such as sharingan and skills such as Eight Extreme Crash have not increased at all for 6 years. This means that this system is really bullshith, This system does not allow MC to develop even though the MC continues to practice independently, only system skills points that can improve all things about MCs, practicing only a waste of time. In the end the storyline and the level of strength of the MC are always controlled by the system.

Does MC only rely on system points for 6 years to increase their cultivation? I mean isn't he always practicing, at this moment he is really still equal to his cultivation With characters like Tang San, Zhuqing etc. Even the sharingan and skills created by themselves are not developing. This system is actually annoying whether it means only the system points can make an increase, whether personal training is just a waste of time?

Ok in my opinion Sharingan is the second basic thing besides the system that is always owned by every reincarnation or transmigator in the fanfic story.

Hopefully the system provides a solution because if the MC continues to behave like villain and hostile to Tan San and Yu Xiaogang So he must be aware of Tang Hao, he might not intervene directly to the MC But he will definitely target Xiaowu if he is on the MC.

Really embarrassing a transmigator with a system cheat with story knowledge, But made to beg form mercy. Embarrassing

It is very difficult to try not to criticize MC's actions.