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Sameer_Bajpai

Sameer_Bajpai

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2023-05-09 Se unióGlobal
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  • Sameer_Bajpai
    Sameer_Bajpai3 months ago
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    Dogshit garbage. After reading this I felt like killing myself.

  • Sameer_Bajpai
    Sameer_Bajpai7 months ago
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    I love that MC is not a whore. MC-FMC dynamic is cute. I recommend author to shortly introduce MC to a lake as he has dominated the pond (Compete Intergalactic ally).One of the only shortcoming I found was recent fights were not interesting and system powers are non existent (It just shows Status)

  • Sameer_Bajpai
    Sameer_Bajpai7 months ago
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    I enjoyed the Virtual game arc. After the game came into being in the real world I started to slowly lose interest and stopped reading. Apart from MC and his sister, depth in other characters was lacking. Overall decent read for an arc.

  • Sameer_Bajpai
    Sameer_Bajpai8 months ago
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    Almost perfect. 1-> needs more background of how things are coming to be. Not just saying this happened. 2-> more R18 :) 3-> more focus on dynamics of the harem and more highlights on some members who just became part of the harem instantly.

  • Sameer_Bajpai
    Sameer_Bajpai8 months ago
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    1-> Overall poor writing. 2-> Boring MC vs Protagonist/Antagonist Fights 3-> Lame MC (too much self loathing to appear vulnerable and then being cold about other things) 4-> Gods & Memory BS 5-> MC isn't likable