Clean_Wizard

True it is one of the things I wish I had been more creative about. My thought process at the time was thinking most of the names other that a few had normal names so thought best to pick one normal

I think I have been doing better in that department when writing the further chapters. And honestly he was just getting used to the magic world can’t go around acting all arrogant. And in regards to to another comment on his property, it is true that children wizards can’t receive lordship until they are adults. And I figure it would just be way to unrealistic if a 11 year old boy received everything. Another reason why I made andromeda the head of house black and gave him access to the library. Just fits better. Thank you for the enthusiasm on my FF, and look forward to your future comments

True, but he was technically next in line for the title if Greyson was never born

I’ll definitely look into it. Not trying to blow up the novel with crazy additions but it’s definitely something to look into, thanks

Thanks for the feed back I’ll bring some action to the next chapters

Nah just trying to build an accord, trying to show she is trying to change to make friends like she did after the troll incident, she hasn’t broken the books are law ideology at all yet, she respects Mc way of magic because she seen it with her own eyes. The MC only person he talks to is Hermione and his owl Helga so I get it may look like he is obsessed with her, I just haven’t written in anyone he can get to know yet other than the trio. I’m also not going for the overpowered approach, I hate reading those kinds as it’s not at all realistic. I’m also really thinking on how to start the confrontation with Mc and Neville so feel free to add what you’d look forward to seeing in that accord. Thank you for your feedback, hope to see you next chapter

Yeah I would like to submit more but I’m trying to keep the page count and grammar as best quality as possible. I’m going to be trying to submit faster though in the future, thanks for reading

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That’s a good one, under strong consideration