rimuru_123

at the moment is important 😒🤔

so much so that there was no hate or rage were left

it's your fanfic after all😁

hey bro when did he cultivate his yang qi🤔

I am writing this review to explain some stuff about this fanfic. 1 : Zhou Yuan was born with the Dual blessing of the Sacred dragon blessing and Taotai blessing. At first Taotai blessing was extremely suppressed by his sacred dragon blessing making people unable to notice it. This was why only his sacred dragon blessing was stolen and dragon resentment poison was sealed with in him. After that he had gained ability to hide his taotai blessing under dragon resentment poison making other people unable to detect it until he showed it to them or When he used infront of them. 2 : The thing about copy talent is that he can only use it to copy talent from someone if they either have talent which was superior to him or have a talent which he didn't have. and also he can't copy divine bone. 3 : Copy talent can also be used to copy someone's innate physic. He can't copy physic that are cultivated by people so keep that in mind. He can't copy physic like saint glass body and also he can't copy divine physic. 4 : I like the main story line as it's excellent work by its creator so This fanfic will follow main story line along with few spices from me. So keep this in mind while reading it. Hope you enjoy the story

English isn't my first or second language but I am trying to improve it.🙂

Comment your thoughts about this.

I already said it will follow the main story and I want starting chapter to remain the same Because it shows his relation ship with his family. Now it will be fast passed from here and I remind you again it will be same as the main story apart from the few changes. If you have any idea do comment it here.

Yes, it was a mistake on my part. I will correct it.

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