Arnold_Kalalo

Love the story! I like all the element of the stories. But but there is a slightly wrong use of language. Keep up the good work, author! I'm really curious with the ending.

A unique thriller story, not sadistic but interesting to read. I absolutely loved the detailed portrayal of the characters and the composition of the dialog is just right and very neat. However, there are some grammar mistakes, Curious about the ending, keep up the good work!

I really like story ideas that seem interesting and easy to understand. There are some grammar mistakes but that's okay. The fantasy story is packaged in a very unique way that makes the reader curious about the ending. Keep up the good work author!