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Thank you!!! I just made the changes you suggested, I'll check the previous chapters in the next few days[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I've read a lot of novels in the bdsm genre, but this article has the hero and heroine in a brand new relationship, and it's definitely the first one I've seen, which caught my eye. I'm looking forward to see Milane continue to "train" the proud man, and I hope the author keeps updating!

Thank you very much for your advice! I'm already looking for editors. Hopefully my plot will get better and better and not disappoint those who read it！

He is🥹🥹🥹 Because of some tragic encounters as a child, Orville has become a very cold-blooded and selfish person who sees Chad as his own private property👱🏻👱🏻👱🏻 Because Chad failed Orville's 'test' (testing Chad's loyalty with the Gill), it was humiliating for Orville because he saw Chad as the most perfect 'dog' he had trained (which is why he made Chad the Deputy Knight Commander) So Orville really wanted to kill Chad, feeling that what betrayed him should be discarded. And he left Chad alive because Ray was too clumsy and made Orville's quality of life lower Yes, Orville is such an extremely selfish person, but he is still blessed with such extreme beauty that I would call him 'the beauty with a snake's heart'🧜🏻‍♂️🧜🏻‍♂️🧜🏻‍♂️ Believe me, Orville will be punished and he will change💆🏼💆🏼💆🏼

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