I'm a god. How can you kill a god? What a grand and intoxicating innocence. I'm a god. How can you kill a god? Shame on you, sweet Nerevar.
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That's all that needed to be said. Our boy's got his priorities straight
Other than the repeating part of the 1st chapter (which I have read), I like the writing quality! I like how you post so frequently, but don't overwhelm yourself if it proves to be a lot. Characters seem alright and nothing out of the norm. I like how you introduce us with something strange, almost alien-like which captivated everyones' attention but most of them lose interest and go back to their work. Seems pretty reasonable, but honestly I'd think the kids sitting by the window would still peak at what's going on, no? Overall, pretty good. Solid 4.0.
I noticed that part of the chapter is duplicated. Was that on purpose? Or was that an error on your part?
Very good start. War on the first chapter? Love it.
Read along further. The MC is not an isekai himself, but there are major characters who have plot relevance that are. I know it's a little confusing looking at it in the first chapter but trust me, it makes more sense going down the road.
Hai, hai, update from author boy here. In the past, I have lost motivation for this novel due to personal reasons I will not disclose here. I understand some of you may have dropped this novel, but please come back! After re-reading my content I've felt a fire rekindle inside of me which makes me want to continue this novel. I shall pick up from where we left off and continue Fenris's journey! By the way, I've started a new novel as well, called "From the Depths to Beyond", which is in a more contemporary setting, and involves a less heroic protagonist. Perhaps that's more your taste? Go ahead and read it now then! https://www.webnovel.com/book/from-the-depths-to-beyond_27548759805848905
Thank you! ^^
Thank you for being honest about my book! I appreciate that you love the grammar structure. ^^ Keep reading! I plan to keep publishing more chapters in the future, so stay tuned for that!
Thank you! Keep reading, it gets better!
The brother gets better later on. Think of him like Katsuki Bakugou in a way. Over the next two chapters, he's going to be maturing a bit but still bitter towards Fenris, holding in a grudge.