Mohamed_Traore

The way things are going, I hope you’re not planning to separate him from Mira. It would be better if you found a way to free her, even if it’s justified by the fact that she’s linked to Alex. That would be much cooler. She was always there for him and was even ready to die for him. So saying that he can only trust Brontes… well, anyway, I just hope she won’t be pushed aside, sidelined, or even erased like in many novels of this kind, especially after presenting her as having unlimited potential. Also, Alex suddenly becoming a king and his rank, which was supposed to be B+ soon reaching A-, suddenly dropping to B-… Anyway, it’s still cool. I can’t wait for it to continue.

I didn't really understand why he suddenly decided to hurt Zoey. She'd been sidelined since they were supposed to be a couple. Out of the blue, he meets a new girl and bam, he lets his guard down. In just a few conversations, bam, he tells Zoey, "Yeah, let's take a break," thinking only of himself for no good reason, and bam, he breaks up with her. And bam, he's already with the other girl and sleeping with her. Whereas Zoey was patient and supportive. His only excuse is, "Yeah, she'd already felt jealous," even though she was manipulating herself. It's like someone trying to justify the harm they've done by bringing up old issues they were supposed to have forgiven and forgotten. Since when does Atticus let his guard down so easily? If not having a harem bothers you, just do it instead of making excuses to hurt people.

If I could, I'd give it more stars because it's so good. If only there were more chp per week 🤧. The further we go, the more we want to know, and the more we know, the more we want. I hope Neo manages to surprise <i> and break free from his calculations. At the same time, it would make sense; no one should be able to predict a Heavenbreaker. So even if <me> is actually Neo, Neo should break all his predictions because Neo all

However, I wanted to share my concerns regarding the character of Vlad. As a Progenitor, Vlad is a central character with immense power, and I have been disappointed to see him consistently sidelined. His role in the story often feels like that of a "stepping stone" for the development of other characters, which leaves me with the impression that his potential is being underestimated. I understand that the story needs to evolve dramatically, but it feels like Vlad, despite his great power, is mistreated and at times ignored by the plot and other characters, even some of his close allies. This has been especially evident in the way he is treated by characters like Jeanne, and I feel that he deserves much more than just being constantly relegated to the role of the "falling character." I would truly appreciate seeing a more balanced development for him, a redemption arc, or a shift in dynamics that would no longer keep him in the shadow of others, particularly Victor. I want to emphasize that this message is written with the utmost respect for your work and creativity. I understand that each character has a role to play, but I believe that Vlad has enormous potential that deserves further exploration and respect for the power he embodies.