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An1k3tk3 years agoPublicado porgood stuff. no cringe. a lot to explore.
- An1k3tk3 years agoPublicado por
so i am at 40-50. story and the world is good but the writing style is so ass. like why every author on webnovel love to repeat some words (example, author has used scowled and grimaced a million times already). and also there's a lot of over explanation as if author is trying too hard. ik when u start your first novel you tend copy others like copying thr explanation of an object. i by no mean trying to hate but i wanted to know that did the writing improve? or did no one gave the advice to the author to improve? i will still read the story, it's just the experience makes me a bit hesitant. love to the author for the awesome world and power system he build.
- An1k3tk3 years agoComentado por
2 times now
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NAAAAAAH DUDE!
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Ntr....NOOOOOOOOOOO
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author...das the answer
- An1k3tk3 years agorespondió a prajwalsuma96
saitama was out for 20 something chaps
- An1k3tk3 years agoComentado por
wait till you see the dumb mc
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