Umbra71

Either the increase needs to be only by 4% or it should be at 51%, or you need to add a wind affinity stat. I say this cause in chapter 3 it says that over time his wind affinity reached 34%, but there was never a wind affinity stat. Either the wind affinity stat should be the same as the sky affinity, wind affinity stat should be added to the board, or you should explain the difference between sky affinity and wind affinity cause they sound the same.

I get this is for school purposes, but from where I’m from just simply giving away an address without said persons permission is an invasion of privacy. Even if it’s a magical artifact doing so.

So is he Harry from the GoT world who is simultaneously getting memories from another Harry in the HP word, or is he Harry from the HP world transported to the GoT world? I only ask because you’re showing flashbacks (maybe) to his time in the HP word where he learns all these secrets about his parents and others, then have him wondering if he’ll find out the secrets of his parents in a completely different world. When you tell a story with these types of inconsistencies it gets kind of confusing to follow what’s real and what’s not.

Rewrite? Or is this just a reupload?

Couldn’t he technically just figure out everything the three-eyed raven and the children of the forest know by asking his infinite library for knowledge of everything they know? If so then there’s no real reason to talk to them other than potentially making them allies.

Didn’t realize Voldemort and Dumbles were bigger threats than beings like darkseid, doomsday, steppenwolf and likes.

My app screwed up, lol. This was meant to be under the picture of the giant insects

I saw this and could only imagine the people of Westeros and Essos (I think that’s how you spell them) shitting themselves.

If this is not the same book or an uncredited copy then I would also like to apologize to the author for insinuating so.

Can’t remember where, or what title, but I have read a book that is a word for word copy of this. The only difference is that that book is further ahead than this one, but I guess I’ll be able to see by the next chapter or two if this is truly a different book. If this turns out to be the exact same book, and the author has posted this somewhere else under a different book name or author name, then I simply overlooked that fact and apologize for anyone who might think I am saying that this author copied the book from anyone. If, however, this is an uncredited copy then shame on the author for not giving credit where it is due.