red_razz

have been enjoying things up until this last arc.just wish things hadn't devolved into intrigue plots and forced relivance of characters that have done nothing for the story over all but be continuous pointless foils

quite liking this story but I'm hoping our lovely MC stops/ or at least catches on to the fact her "children" betray her every chance they get...she showers them with love and they do nothing but lie and betray her....it is sad to see that they all get away with it with no recompense :(

absolutely loving your writing

I read this far hoping the MC would be fleshed out but he falls into the same repetition every event.acts like hot stuff until he turns into a simpering little child as he gets knocked around like a toy.at this point the MC shouldn't train others as he has been useless in every single fight

why write in a defeatest mindset when the character hasn't been written that way at all...it's been going fine until now even with things not working out how the MC wants...don't need to shoestring in something just for suspense

...the exact same "mistake" as when he fought the other mage...he should have a lot more awareness than this...or at learned something...

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza