Anmortis

Mai or Maki? Which one you mean?

I just noticed that I forgot some parts. Did the Uchiha massacre happen the same way? Or were there some changes?

Count of Serenno by y1fellas from Fanfiction. net(37 chapter). original author of this story. I just wanted to write this in case anyone is wondering. Although this comment will probably be deleted. As before.

I think your writing quality is good and it's generally fun to read. However, the content of the chapters and the events in the later chapters don't seem to suit my taste. I can understand her losing to the Root member. But, it seems illogical to me to share that you are a reborn person with someone else, no matter how much you trust them. Other than that, I'm bored of reading recipes. I mean, slice-of-life sections are generally fun to read. We get to know the world you created better and her relationships with other characters develop. But when I get into Naruto fan fiction, what I want to read is not food and music. It feels like an filler episode rather than a slice of life episode. It's not easy to write a fan fiction with more than one reincarnation. I've read a Naruto fan fiction with many more reincarnations before and it's good. If it's done well, it could be a very high-quality book. But I've decided to take a break from this book for now. I was disappointed by a few decisions made by the main character. I hope you continue writing this book until the end. I wonder if you read this entire comment. Anyways, TFTC.

I was so cringe that I couldn't read the fight scene at the end. It was obvious from the title, but didn't she study taijutsu with her father? Also, she's becoming more and more dependent on Sora every day, and it's not fun to read about it. I mean, she should be friends with him, but only with him? Wasn't she in her 17s in her previous life? Why is she still acting like she's 6?

Hey, Danzo! I found a talented kid. He might be useful for ROOT.

I really don't know why but I never liked Sora. I hope that in the future, her friendship with Sora will break up and she will make other friends.

It's feel like he use her.

abomination?